In many ways, I find Book One's diagnosis of the problem far more fascinating than Book Two's prescription for it. In the various ills outlined in Raphael Hythloday's perhaps exaggerated (but then again perhaps not exaggerated?) screed on England's ills, one can find many parallels with contemporary America--and even not-so-contemporary America.
For instance, Hythloday's extended speech on England's thievery procedures links up uncannily with America's current drug trade problems. Hythloday describes a people without much to live for, newly-minted vagabonds for whom the two options are stealing or starving. It brings to mind the conventional picture of inner-city and low-income America: filled with people forced to deal drugs on the corner in order to support their families (or even just themselves).
England's penalty for theft, according to Hythloday's account, was execution. To Hythloday this is a prime example of the punishment being far greater than the crime; he suggests turning thieves into easily identifiable forced laborers (part of their ear gets cut off, and they are required to wear a certain garment). And while no one in their right mind would suggest that convicted drug dealers should become, essentially, slaves, many have argued that the current penalties for drug trafficking are excessively harsh--think of all the prisons out there populated just as much by drug dealers as by rapists, murderers, etc. These people, past and present, are forced into their present circumstances as a result of dire poverty and the prospect of starvation, and then punished for taking what can seem like the only way out.
More's suggestion to Hythloday--that he perhaps lower his outrage meter, accept that certain things are inevitable, and try in his own small way to make the world a better place--sounds, in this context, both surprisingly modern and a lot like the way our best politicians go about introducing their ideas. (All this is enough to make me want to learn about political philosophy, which I've never really had an interest in.)
Hythloday's description of the vagabonds kicked off their land and forced to fend for themselves without any useful skills also brings to mind the condition of post-Civil War, Reconstruction-era slaves. Obviously these are different scenarios, in that the emancipation of slaves was an objectively good thing, but there are still parallels: suddenly large swaths of unskilled laborers are without their homes, wandering in search of some sort of steady income. That Utopia goes on to address these problems, and provide (maybe a bit too radical for my if-I'm-being-totally-honest politically disengaged/unconscious self but nonetheless) SOLUTIONS and examples re: these problems, is just one of many reasons (the other being the parchment thing Prof. Calhoun discussed in his lecture) that this text has survived as long as it has.
I really like how you modernize More's text in this rumination by comparing it to our current and historical situations in America. You make the text more relateable by placing it in familiar terms, and I have to agree that the punishments do outweigh the crimes in cases of drugs (trafficking and dealing). Our current system prosecutes drug crimes entirely too harshly in my opinion, and caters to the wealthy when it comes to levels of punishment. The comparison between crack and cocaine for instance (essentially the same drug, except one is cheaper and therefore more readily available in poor areas) is astounding. For equal amounts of cocaine and crack possession, the punishment is far less for the cocaine dealer than it is for the crack dealer, and operates on such a skewed graduated scale that a person can clearly see how the drug laws are favoring those of a wealthier class. Applying More's advice to this situation is all a person can really do, just try to change whatever you can.
ReplyDeleteI couldn't agree with More more when he tells Raphael to do his best to change the world in small ways for the better. I never really thought about it before, but I suppose this really is a quite modern idea. More is suggesting a "grassroots" social movement that can start from just one person standing up for what is good and right in his own life and extending that out into his community. I'm totally for that.
ReplyDeleteHowever, I don't think that mildly minding one's own business and doing good things is ultimately enough to change much in the world. There's way too much apathy going on (or rather, not going on). I think everyone should have a balance of simple acceptance and willingness to help out and also enough proactive spirit and guttsiness to get out there and rally up support for what's right.
I really enjoyed reading your modern twist on More's description of thievery and the punishment for it. It is true that punishments in Utopia and present day are harsh. I was really shocked to read about the punishment of thievery in Utopia. I immediately thought of the story that I learned about in my British Lit II class in which a women and her children were poor and homeless and no one would give the mother a job and her and her children eventually contracted typhoid and died in the street which led the entire neighborhood to contract typhoid. It definitely would have been easier for the people in the town give the mother the help she needed instead of leading to the death of everyone. This reminds me of how harsh Utopia was on their own thieves and that perhaps if they were more understanding and provided the thieves with the food and work that they needed, it would be in the best interest for everyone in Utopia.
ReplyDeleteVick, I think you make an interesting point between crack and cocaine. Society definitely favors groups of people and Utopia is just yet another example of that.
I'm not sure I can entirely agree with your rumination. I agree with the comment that the wealthy get off easy but I actually think that our system needs stronger punishments, not lighter! I also don't think that all those who choose, and that is the key word, to have this kind of life style are forced into it with no other means.
ReplyDeleteAt least in this version you would only make the mistake once, unlike all the repeat offenders we have now.